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 It's closed. Looking over her shoulder at the approaching group of girls, she says, "Ah, I wouldn't go in here." Reason? "There's weird spirits and ghosts inside," Akemi continues with a smile that's a little too innocent to make for a convincing lie. Surely, those rumors about her being some weird spirits and ghosts girl can get her someplace, right? Right?
-*click* "It's... also locked, actually. Weird..." ("If something nefarious is going on, you think they'd leave the front door open?")
+''click'' "It's... also locked, actually. Weird..." ("If something nefarious is going on, you think they'd leave the front door open?")
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- "What on earth have you done to these insects?" Guma replies, disgusted by the siege of insects as they land on Sailor Moon and Dark Amber. "Ugh. I thought the sort of pesticides people came up with were bad enough, but now youma have gotten into the business? Of all things, and what on earth is--" Guma winces at the sonic scream blasting by at the speed of sound, probably breaking a barrier or two.
+"What on earth have you done to these insects?" Guma replies, disgusted by the siege of insects as they land on Sailor Moon and Dark Amber. "Ugh. I thought the sort of pesticides people came up with were bad enough, but now youma have gotten into the business? Of all things, and what on earth is--" Guma winces at the sonic scream blasting by at the speed of sound, probably breaking a barrier or two.
- ("Remember the boy! We should search for him.") Akemi's helpful voice prods the Maiden. ("This youma's probably weak. The boy with the blade and the sailor girls'll take them out in no time, just like back at the shrine!")
+("Remember the boy! We should search for him.") Akemi's helpful voice prods the Maiden. ("This youma's probably weak. The boy with the blade and the sailor girls'll take them out in no time, just like back at the shrine!")
- "Aren't you an interesting one." Studying Nephrite as he steps outside the boutique, Guma raises an arm, a delicate angle to her hand. "What do you want with the boy?" The hidden tattoo on the Maiden's back glows scarlet, shooting glittering beams of red light that condense over her outstretched hand, forming a clawed paw. "Let him go."
+"Aren't you an interesting one." Studying Nephrite as he steps outside the boutique, Guma raises an arm, a delicate angle to her hand. "What do you want with the boy?" The hidden tattoo on the Maiden's back glows scarlet, shooting glittering beams of red light that condense over her outstretched hand, forming a clawed paw. "Let him go."
- Tuxedo Mask gives an advance warning, causing the Maiden to shut her eyes against his flare. "Now!" she encourages, leaping forward, clawed 'hand' at the ready. "The boy's safety is our first priority!"
+Tuxedo Mask gives an advance warning, causing the Maiden to shut her eyes against his flare. "Now!" she encourages, leaping forward, clawed 'hand' at the ready. "The boy's safety is our first priority!"
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- Something in Shitennou's words, despite their truthfulness, cause the Maiden's gold eyes to narrow with contempt as if Nephrite had instead insulted her. Yes, she remembers. The children lying on the steps outside of the shrine, who were fleeing the monsters that were attacking before drained of their energy by an individual seeming to want the very same thing. "Then I shall gladly fight you until you're forced to to concede defeat!"
+Something in Shitennou's words, despite their truthfulness, cause the Maiden's gold eyes to narrow with contempt as if Nephrite had instead insulted her. Yes, she remembers. The children lying on the steps outside of the shrine, who were fleeing the monsters that were attacking before drained of their energy by an individual seeming to want the very same thing. "Then I shall gladly fight you until you're forced to to concede defeat!"
- Blind contempt does nothing to dull a blade. The Maiden reels backwards far too late, having invested herself against Nephrite's defense. "... I should have recognized that uniform at first glance... The children at the shrine, were you involved in that as well? Serving some dark queen?" 'My Dark Queen thanks you for the harvest, ladies -- and so do I!' Oh, Guma remembers the man, his words.
+Blind contempt does nothing to dull a blade. The Maiden reels backwards far too late, having invested herself against Nephrite's defense. "... I should have recognized that uniform at first glance... The children at the shrine, were you involved in that as well? Serving some dark queen?" 'My Dark Queen thanks you for the harvest, ladies -- and so do I!' Oh, Guma remembers the man, his words.
- She remembers how stupid she felt, to not have realized the plan for what it was until it was too late.
+She remembers how stupid she felt, to not have realized the plan for what it was until it was too late.
- As Nephrite turns his focus to Jupiter and Tuxedo Mask, Guma whips a glowing hand upward, throwing a red crescent of energy straight at Nephrite's chest.
+As Nephrite turns his focus to Jupiter and Tuxedo Mask, Guma whips a glowing hand upward, throwing a red crescent of energy straight at Nephrite's chest.
- "You still have me to deal with!"
+"You still have me to deal with!"
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 --snaps her hand out at the last moment and ''catches'' the spike with an iron grip in the instant before it would pierce her chest, the needle tip of it just touching the fabric of her uniform above the pink bow.
-It's not effortless; the lines of muscle and tendon stand out in her arm from the effort, and just touching the thing lets the power of darkness burn through her, draining energy from her like water out of a punctured vessel. But Tuxedo Kamen's hand is on her shoulder, filling her with strength faster thatn it can drain away. Lips curling back from her teeth in a pained grimace, Jupiter clenches her fist around the evil thing, ''grips'' until it shatters into wisps of ominous black smoke. "I don't kneel to ''anyone,''" she says through her teeth--
+It's not effortless; the lines of muscle and tendon stand out in her arm from the effort, and just touching the thing lets the power of darkness burn through her, draining energy from her like water out of a punctured vessel. But Tuxedo Kamen's hand is on her shoulder, filling her with strength faster than it can drain away. Lips curling back from her teeth in a pained grimace, Jupiter clenches her fist around the evil thing, ''grips'' until it shatters into wisps of ominous black smoke. "I don't kneel to ''anyone,''" she says through her teeth--
 --and then Tuxedo Mask goes down, cut off mid-sentence, and Sailor Jupiter has one split second to go wide-eyed in shock before raw fury takes over and the very air around her begins to crackle with an electrical charge.

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